WORKING on SPIDERMAN and his AMAZING FRIENDS

I did this douring the last week-end,the illustration homage the cartoons of SPIDERMAN and his AMAZING FRIENDS, that i LOVED when i was a child,especially about Bobby Drake/Iceman,that still one of my favourites caracter. I REALLY would like to have some critics and ADVICE, before ending,so feel free to tell me...WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT IT ?!!?

P.s. DON'T ask me to post THIS UNFINISHED WORK in any yours gallery,PLEASE....I'll FINISH very SOON, I promise, HAVE FATE !!!